I was expecting an unapologetic telling of a married man being seduced by young girls with all the guilty and the erotic anticipation it ensues. But I was disappointed. All of that is present in the book, but since it has 26 pages you can imagine it's very hurried and underdeveloped.
And because I also feel lazy, I'll discuss this book in topics:
- The female author doesn't seem convincing in embodying a male protagonist. Too many worries about his own clothes, too little observation on the female bodies involved.
- Half of the story is spent on his decaying marriage. Which would be interesting, was I not reading an erotic book.
- Saying "I'm not thinking about my wife during sex with another woman" tells the absolute opposite: that you're thinking about your wife during sex with the other woman.
- The lady who seduces him first is recently separated and wants a married guy to give her sex. We can conclude that her marriage didn't end because of a treason from her husband... or she would be very sensitive about having a married man as a lover.
- Magically, our hero becomes a womanizer, knows how to talk to the ladies and get her single asses on his married cock. He gets more three younger lovers, experience a threesome (that is not given in details - a huge miss in an erotic story). How that happen? We don't know. It's delivered too fast.
No details.
And erotica is all about DETAILS.